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Post by azbatx on Jan 25, 2010 19:16:14 GMT -5
I drew this one last year. I am just getting back into drawing again after a few years of not doing it.  |
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Post by G on Jan 25, 2010 23:06:44 GMT -5
I seen you post of few of these on Facebook and I thought they was pretty good. Not sure I understand the Jason fascination or if I should be worried, but it shows promise. You should try drawing some of your favorite DC heroes!
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Post by defiant1 on Jan 26, 2010 0:14:15 GMT -5
I think it looks good, but the mask facing down makes it look like the mask iis sliding off his face because the proportion are right for the face to be looking straight ahead.
df1
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Post by G on Jan 26, 2010 7:16:58 GMT -5
I think it looks good, but the mask facing down makes it look like the mask iis sliding off his face because the proportion are right for the face to be looking straight ahead. df1 I don't mind the mask much, it does look like his head is pointing down and maybe it could look good looking straight ahead. But it doesn't bother me the way it is. The only thing that kind of bugs me Az is the hand holding the sword. It looks like you could make the handle a little further down and make his hand just a little bit bigger. He looks like he has tiny hands. Other than that, think the picture is pretty hot! Keep it up man!  |
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Post by bigw1966 on Jan 26, 2010 10:58:27 GMT -5
I like the use of negative space in this image. I agree with the others about the mask and the hand holding the sword.
IMO, the head would be fine if there was less neck visible. When the head is tilted downward, the neck recedes out of view from the chosen angle.
His arm does look like it ends in the sword -vs- a hand holding the sword.
Still the way you approached the background wroks well to push the figure forward. If there was some more shading done to Jason it would probably increase the mood even more.
Good job AZ
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Post by Wrecks on Jan 27, 2010 19:45:02 GMT -5
Looks pretty good. I didn't even notice the Mask issue until the others mentioned it .
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